Tuesday, 1 June 2021
The Lion inside
The big lazy lion was a big show off. He was all strong and he was brave. He roars so loud. He has lots of fur on him. It's big. He sleeps on a big rock.He has sharp claws and teeth. His eyes are green. Everyone likes him. THe mouse was small and shy . He is too little. No one can see him. Sometimes he gets squished and one time he saw the lion . When the lion roared the mouse went back to his house and thought that roaring isn’t so hard so he tried but failed. He got confident and went to the lion’s house and went into the lion's face. Then he asked the lion. Would you help me roar? Then the lion woke up and said ekkk then jumped back. The mouse said don't worry, I'm friendly. Then when they were done the lion used. Hahaha instead of roar. The lion learnt don’t be a show off and the mouse learned size doesn't matter.
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Kia ora I like the idea of lion not roaring but wouldn't it still scary enough saying Ha ha ha why didn't the lion just say normal stuff like hello and be friendly. I think that it was brave of the mouse to go up to the lion maybe also mabe put in a label.
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good morning/afternoon/evening, I loved your retell of the loin inside it was a great story about a loin🦁and and mouse🐭, and I thought about this everyone ignores RIGHT! so do other mice ignores him? I have this book at home and I like the bit when they share the rock! you should share it to your class about sharing and mabye the whole school! do you agree with me? blog you later!🙃✌️
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